Full Dark, No Stars

Anthony Weber —  December 31, 2011 — Leave a comment

I am not the first to say, nor will I be the last, that Stephen King is an interesting guy.  As a writer with a clear eye for good and evil, he captures the depravity of the human condition remarkably well.  He writes in the afterward, “If you’re going into a very dark place…you should take a bright light, and shine it on everything… Bad writing usually arises from a stubborn refusal to tell stories about what people actually do.”  If there were ever a question about whether or not we the people have within us a hidden self capable of doing remarkably foul deeds (as several characters in this collection of short stories do), King resolves it with a resounding, “Yes, there is.”  That light he shines is a revealing one.

He also writes in the afterward, “The people in these stories are not without hope”; he follows this with the caveat that “our fondest hopes…may sometimes be in vain. Often, even.”  In spite of the evil in most of his characters, he finishes the afterward by noting, “I believe most people are essentially good. I know that I am.”  This seems promising, as he also writes that “the writer’s only responsibility is to look for the truth inside his own heart.”  If King is essentially good, and his stories come from the truth inside his heart, literary magic should follow.

And in some ways it does.  I suspect he writes so bleakly about evil because the goodness within him is appalled by the badness around him.   But if King is also using the truth in his heart to tell stores about what people “actually do”, it seems incongruous that while most of us are apparently essentially good, King’s writing are inhabited by people who are essentially not.  The percentages of the essentially good and the essentially bad in the real world are reversed in the literary worlds he creates.

I will be looking at “Full Dark” by contrasting King’s claims of hope, goodness and truth with the focus of his fiction.

The title captures the feel of the stories very well.  This is meant to be a book full of darkness, with no light shining down (other than King’s authorial light). One story belies the title – there are glimpses of stars – but by this point the light is small and distant, perhaps seen only because the stars have gone nova.  The bonus story puts out what light remains pretty effectively.

I will try not to give away the plots as I offer some comments.

1)    In spite of King’s claims, I don’t see the hope he claims his stories contain.  If I go through the stories in order, the most one can hope for is A) a quick death, B) vengeance and insanity, and C) a destructive deal with the devil.  The bonus story, “Under the Weather,” is a remarkably bleak story of insanity and hopelessness. The one exception is “A Good Marriage,” which ends with a character saying, “You did the right thing,” followed shortly thereafter by the happiest sentence in the book: “She felt younger, lighter.”

2)    There is no forgiveness or reconciliation, with others or within the self.  In King’s worlds, cause and effect work with remarkable efficiency – people definitely reap what they sow.  Even if evil is stopped, those who remain appear to be inescapably stuck – emotionally, psychologically, relationally – in the brutal aftermath.  Only in “A Good Marriage” do we find even a glimpse of the possibility of truly moving on and being able to put the past behind us.  Perhaps that is why I liked it the best.

3)    These stories are set in worlds in which friendship/community is absent.  In almost every case there is no solidarity except with animals. People either live in geographical or personal isolation, or are surrounded by people who may help them but won’t befriend them.  Only in “A Good Marriage” do we find an exception, but even that is fleeting.

4)    The moral worlds of King’s writing are stark (and, I might add, mostly correct), but ultimately baseless.  We all read his stories and agree that the evil portrayed is truly evil but…..why?   Though King is a professing Christian, God plays no role in these stories, though the devil and superstition get some ink.  Without an objective basis for gauging the (im)morality of the characters’ actions,  why are these things evil?  I can think of good pragmatic, utilitarian reasons that the actions of the protagonist in “1922” ought to be morally acceptable.  I can conceive of how evolutionary morality can justify the actions of both the antagonist and protagonist in “Big Driver.”  The actions of the protagonist in “Fair Extension” are just wrong on so many levels, but Neitzsche would call him an uberman.  The instincts of the protagonist in “Under the Weather” make sense as a survival mechanism.   But the stories range from tragic to appalling; I’m not supposed to be able to find a way to justify them.

Interestingly, the “A Good Marriage” – the one story where there is a sense of hope, a sense that an evil was stopped, justice was achieved without vengeance, and those who remain will be able to get on with their lives – is the only one where the God of the Bible is explicitly mentioned, specifically with the idea that there will be justice in the next life.

If I read these stories correctly, King places a premium on friendships; believes justice ought to be served; finds the exploitation of people deplorable; and thinks the lustful, greedy, self-centered, violent “second self” within us all will destroy us and those around us.  If there is hope to be found, it will come from genuinely good people, true justice, self-sacrifice, and the repression of the evil within us.

I agree.  I just wonder why King did not build a foundation from his belief in a God.  I admire his laudable desire to write honestly, but creating a world without God is creating a world that refuses to “tell stories about what people actually do”; i.e., rely on a God who interacts with the world.  It also is a world which refuses to shine the brightest light of all into the dark places.

Perhaps that is why King has such a hard time providing stars.

Anthony Weber


Anthony graduated from Cedarville University in 1995 with a degree in English Education, and from Trinity College of the Bible and Theological Seminary in Newburgh, Indiana in 2004 with a Master's Degree in Theology and Philosophy. Anthony is a husband and father of three, an author ("Learning to Jump Again"), high school and college teacher, pastor, blogger (tcapologetics.org, empiresandmangers.blogspot.com), and co-founder of etcetera, a "street-level philosophy group" in Traverse City, Michigan.